holy cow! wasn't expecting that!
A Bit Anti-Climatic
The best part about this was the visual and audio special effects. I would have liked to seen more of a story line. Voices would have been a nice touch. As far as creativity and design I think that you made good choices as far as realism with Mario's character as well as the game play backgrounds. I think that it could have been more of a build up to the end, though. The "random" ending was the best one. The other two were anti-climatic. I could tell that there was a lot of work put into this. I don't think that there's much that needs to be done to make it perfect! I hope to see more soon!
yeah i have to admit that the endings indeed were abit anti-climatic since it was the end of a long animation time and i was growning kind of impatient and unfortunatly rushed some aspects.
Thanks for your review saramary3
I could tell that there was a lot of work put into this. I saw the similarities to the game, but I didn't find it funny. I think that it has some really good parts that could be worked on to make it funny, though. The hungry/ door bit was good as well as when he was walking it was along side the wall instead of straight. I don't come across a lot of live action stuff that intrigues me on here and this one has a lot of potential. I would love to see it cleaned up and reworked a bit.
Yeah, I wish this had turned out better. Not time to clean it up I'm afraid.
I liked the random explosions and dialogue. Even though the actual game play moves a bit slow, I felt that it could have been a little faster. The slow fire ball scene was funny as well as the door scene. Overall I think it was a decent flash! Nice work!
I kind of forget what actually happens in this flash. It seems to be so long ago. Thank your for the review and feel free to review any of my stuff.
I think that this could be the start of some pretty funny writing material if you work with it a lot more. The end really did make me smile. The audio was really poor quality and jumbled as well as the video itself. I also tend to lean more towards doing your own work as opposed to dubbing. I saw in your description that you plan on making more. I would really think about going away from dubbed stuff and do something original.
I really liked the use of color on this one. The imagery was random, but that seemed to work to your advantage. It had a way of really holding my attention. It was fun to watch!
A Good Start
From what I saw I think that you have an excellent foundation for something to really blossom out of this! The music and sound effects were on point as well as the "general" outline for the animation.
...But, a bit boring at moments. I really loved the idea of explaining this but if you worked on the animation more and added some more soothing, less talkative, audio it could be REALLY entrancing. I would love to see it portrayed as a simple story. I found the lesson really interesting but not that entertaining. This is just an opinion, though. Your main character was really cute! I liked the patchwork design! =)
I found some parts really funny actually! I had no idea that it was going to be this long! Damn!!!
First thing, coming from someone that has followed and loves the "Alice is Dead" series this music was a completely wrong choice. There really is only one game/ movie that this music fits with in my opinion. It seemed to me that you threw a bunch of stuff together without putting much effort into it. I really don't mean any offense by saying this.
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